Thursday, November 20, 2008

PINS AND NEEDLES TREATMENT

Creative Writing

Pins and Needles

A happy couple were getting married in a church, when a terrible fire occurres, killing all their family and friends, only the couple and the vicar survive, but with gruesome deforming burns. Many strange newly married couple crime scenes have happened since, both with the same strange incidents. The victims are all paralyzed for eternity by being pierced with needles, and wax is pored over their faces from the candles which surround them to preserve their expressions of horror. The words “I Do” are carved into the victims with a cake knife. These murders happened often over the course of a year, police are still baffled, when suddenly the body of the male killer is found dead, his deformed face seen for the first time without his mask. It seems total madness had gripped the couple, and the wife had brutally murdered her killing partner, pairing up with the vicar to continue their sick rituals together. She is an acupuncture freak, and uses pins and needles to torture and paralyse her victims. She lives in an underground lair in the woods with a little hut instructed by the vicar to paralyze all the couples he marries, where the walls are covered in the victims face masks, which they ware when committing their rituals. The vicar uses these masks to change his identity, allowing him to marry the couples and uphold his strange beliefs.
The sequence will show past images about the couple and what happened to them. With a voice over a conversation between the victims father and a police officer, the two talk like friends. Images and clips show up on the screen with the titles as the officer describes the crime scenes and what happens. The victim’s father is a Special Forces police who has just moved to this area when his daughter and newly married husband turn up paralyzed just a few days after the wedding in their new location. The two men used to be partners and have been united through coincidence and the situation.

1 comment:

simon wallis said...

Good content but re design the format pleas3!!!!!